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shintu5
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 | Subject: Easter Design (Im an amateur)  Sat Apr 07, 2012 3:45 pm | |
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shintu5
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| | Subject: Re: Easter Design (Im an amateur) Sat Apr 07, 2012 3:45 pm | |
| Criticism is well welcomed =D | |
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Ipod
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Join date : 2012-03-31
Location : Canada
| | Subject: Re: Easter Design (Im an amateur) Sat Apr 07, 2012 3:46 pm | |
| lol did u mean hey why do eater eggs always hide* | |
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shintu5
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| | Subject: Re: Easter Design (Im an amateur) Sat Apr 07, 2012 3:47 pm | |
| Oops grammar mistakes let me fix some stuff and post a new one
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shintu5
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| | Subject: Re: Easter Design (Im an amateur) Sat Apr 07, 2012 3:50 pm | |
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henrytran49
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Join date : 2012-03-29
Age : 33
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| | Subject: Re: Easter Design (Im an amateur) Sat Apr 07, 2012 3:52 pm | |
| "Hey, why do Easter Eggs hide?" "I don't know. Why?" "Shut up, we Easter Eggs have sensitive eggshells." Some fixes.  - Ipod wrote:
- lol did u mean hey why do eater eggs always hide*
Did you mean "Easter" | |
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Cliche
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Join date : 2012-04-01
Age : 25
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| | Subject: Re: Easter Design (Im an amateur) Sat Apr 07, 2012 3:52 pm | |
|  I like it, the joke needs to be a little more clear however, it is very scattered. | |
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shintu5
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| | Subject: Re: Easter Design (Im an amateur) Sat Apr 07, 2012 3:56 pm | |
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shintu5
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| | Subject: Re: Easter Design (Im an amateur) Sat Apr 07, 2012 3:59 pm | |
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Spirit
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| | Subject: Re: Easter Design (Im an amateur) Sat Apr 07, 2012 10:02 pm | |
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